Thursday, 27 July 2017


It is cold
So very cold.
It is so very cold,
You can see frozen geese on the ground,
Hot dogs were cold dogs,
Big cats and cattle cuddle each other carles.
It is so very cold,
Threshers get stuck in thick ice,
Water dragons get very weak,
Chocolates are impossible to chew,
Tee-shirts were too cold.
It is so very cold,
Beaches are bleak
Surfers get stuck in frozen

Dion Wilson

1 comment:

  1. WOW! Dion! that is an AMAZING work on your cold writing task.I like the way that you said/writhed "Chocolate are impossible to chew" on your writing and do know,that it is impossible to chew.I also that you are using imagining muscle on your writing.