It is cold
So very cold.
It is so very cold,
You can see frozen geese on the ground,
Hot dogs were cold dogs,
Big cats and cattle cuddle each other carles.
It is so very cold,
Threshers get stuck in thick ice,
Water dragons get very weak,
Chocolates are impossible to chew,
And
Tee-shirts were too cold.
It is so very cold,
Beaches are bleak
As
Surfers get stuck in frozen
waves.
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Dion Wilson
WOW! Dion! that is an AMAZING work on your cold writing task.I like the way that you said/writhed "Chocolate are impossible to chew" on your writing and do know,that it is impossible to chew.I also that you are using imagining muscle on your writing.
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